Angel of Death

Hey Jig! Its so great to read something new of yours. I just happened to look in Science Fiction and here this was. Well anyways, I can't help you grammar ...

This is quite lovely but I think you could do so much more with this. It flows nicely and everything but considering the comparison of you and someone else to ...

Hey KJ! Sorry I couldn't get to this earlier. And thanks for the critique on Midnight to Dawn, it was really helpful and I'm going to officially start editing over ...

Hey Ky, thanks for the heads up. Ah its been a wonderful journey with you. I'm so happy that you're almost done but it makes me sad that I won't ...

Hey KJ! Thanks for heads up! This was another great chapter and I wish it could be longer. Well I didn't see too many problems but I liked it! Ann's ...

This was a great chapter KJ! I like Rachel and I think you've developed her well in this very first chapter. Which for many people it is hard to do. ...

Hey Ash! First, before I point out a couple of problems, I must say that I love the title and this whole idea. You made Sophia a whole different person, ...

Hello there, You have the idea in check, but you are just not executing it correctly. The repetition of words and short thoughts do not do any justice to the ...

Hey Ash, Wow, I can't believe no one reviewed this. Before I get on with the review, I must say that this is a great story (if I already haven't ...

Well, it looks like I'm hooked. Sorry it took me so long to read this, but I'm glad I decided to read it today. As always, your descriptions and dialog ...

Hey Ky! I am so happy that I am back to read this. I don't know how long my mom is going to be nice to me so, if you ...

Finally I am getting to this! I have three computer classes and yet today all of the teacher's were breathing down my neck. But it's good to be home and ...

I can't believe this went so long without a critique. Well hey, I'm Angel and I will be your reviewer today. This poem was very strong and I get what ...

OMG!! I love love loved this chapter! This story is just getting better and I will say this again: This story is way better then Prom Night. I've been waiting ...

This was brilliant! I was rolling on the floor when I read this. An excellent parody I must say. My favorite part was the end where Bella dies and Edward ...